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Space Age Maximalist's avatar

Fully in bloom. Beautifully written, I thought I was jaded but you still got a disgust reaction out of me.

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Astral's avatar

Thank you for the comment friend. Yes I tried to evoke what it felt like to experience the closeness with another man’s child

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Simon Van de Graaf's avatar

Damn Astral, I didn’t know you were such a good writer; compelling, disgusting and very funny all at the same time!

This growing sense of disgust is something that I have been feeling for a while as well, though I haver had such a close interaction. I just can’t look at them the same way, mudsharks or black men…

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Astral's avatar

This comment mean a lot! Thank you, I am going to write more

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Bryce van Patten Bateman's avatar

What? No " happy ending "? No riding off into the sunset with Becky and lil Shantavious?

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Todd Campbell's avatar

Good article. I had been thinking that she might have been with some nigger even before it was revealed. I grew up around those savages in NJ. Being of Italian descent, I grew up despising them and have never been ashamed of it. There is nothing more disgusting than finding out a white woman......ANY white woman.....marries or ruts with one of those things. In a deracinated society, having a fetish to be with one of them is simply a box to check off. Once a sane society emerges from this trash heap we are in, interracial marriages and coupling will be banned and anyone that does so should be banished.

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Astral's avatar

We are stuck with it they will never stop (the women)

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Nuntius Vidente's avatar

Pretty disgusting

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jstr's avatar

I think you forgot the dedication to Achilles

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The 13th Grade's avatar

This was great.

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Astral's avatar

Thanks. I’ll be reposting a different story soon, stay tuned

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RunSave55's avatar

Excellent writing. In the vein of Delicious Tacos.

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Karl Dahl's avatar

"She should’ve been kept away in a religious temple and offered for breeding to the most decorated war veteran on the year of her flowering. Instead she was raising a drug dealer's kid"

😚👌

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Payload's avatar

Reading this, I kept being reminded of The Slaughter of Cities: Urban Renewal as Ethnic Cleansing by E Michael Jones. Your reactions to meeting the people around this girl are natural and engrained in you. Thus, proving that “multiculturalism” is a massive social engineering project and psychological warfare. Our ancestors never had to deal with unnatural forced association.

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Peter Thistle's avatar

Just listened to your podcast with Isaac on this, great stuff man.

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Burt Macklin's avatar

great writing

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Presto's avatar

Oh damn that's good writing 👌👌

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Clementine's avatar

Was this before the age of social media? Maybe I'm a paranoiac, but there's no way I wouldn't look up the history of anyone I'm being set up with.

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RpAkbar's avatar

Always tragic to see genes that create beauty squandered.

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ALEJANDRO FIND TRUTH's avatar

Is this a true story or fiction? Or based on true events?

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Friedrich Wilhelm III's avatar

This would be a good b plot in a crime flick.

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