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Fully in bloom. Beautifully written, I thought I was jaded but you still got a disgust reaction out of me.

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Thank you for the comment friend. Yes I tried to evoke what it felt like to experience the closeness with another man’s child

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What? No " happy ending "? No riding off into the sunset with Becky and lil Shantavious?

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May 1Liked by Astral

Good article. I had been thinking that she might have been with some nigger even before it was revealed. I grew up around those savages in NJ. Being of Italian descent, I grew up despising them and have never been ashamed of it. There is nothing more disgusting than finding out a white woman......ANY white woman.....marries or ruts with one of those things. In a deracinated society, having a fetish to be with one of them is simply a box to check off. Once a sane society emerges from this trash heap we are in, interracial marriages and coupling will be banned and anyone that does so should be banished.

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We are stuck with it they will never stop (the women)

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Pretty disgusting

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Damn Astral, I didn’t know you were such a good writer; compelling, disgusting and very funny all at the same time!

This growing sense of disgust is something that I have been feeling for a while as well, though I haver had such a close interaction. I just can’t look at them the same way, mudsharks or black men…

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This comment mean a lot! Thank you, I am going to write more

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May 2Liked by Astral

I think you forgot the dedication to Achilles

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Just listened to your podcast with Isaac on this, great stuff man.

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Oh damn that's good writing 👌👌

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Colour me impressed, very good writing Astral.

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great writing

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This would be a good b plot in a crime flick.

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Was this before the age of social media? Maybe I'm a paranoiac, but there's no way I wouldn't look up the history of anyone I'm being set up with.

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I don’t know exactly what you’re trying to say but you owe me $1,000

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